You have a suggestion for a park nearby where you live. Write a
letter to your city’s council. In your letter include:
what your suggestion is
why you think this suggestion will improve the park
when you would like to see this suggestion in action
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am a resident of Sunnyvale city, which is under the juristiction of your council. I live near the Saratoga park and had some suggestion to improve the park. Please allow me to elaborate.
Although the saratoga park has all the modern day amenities for a park, there are some basic necessities which are missing in the park area. Firstly, the park area does not have separate restroom areas for boys and girls which causes awkwardness among people. Having 2 separate bathrooms would reduce the waiting time and also awkwardness among park visitors. Secondly, there very few garbage bins around the park area.Hence people tend to litter around the park, instead of disposing their garbage in the respective bins. Adding more garbage bins would reduce the trash in the park and help to keep it clean. Lastly, I would like to suggest the appointment of a security guard at the gate to increase the safety around the park area. This will make people feel more secure.
I hope you review my requests and try to prioritize these requests before the start of the summer season. This will allow children and adults of this wonderful city have a more secure and pleasant experience during their holiday season.
Yours Sincerely,
Nitin
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-08-14 | sai.varadula | 69 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ay amenities for a park, there are some basic necessities which are missing in the park area. Fi...
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Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...y few garbage bins around the park area.Hence people tend to litter around the park, ...
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Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...y few garbage bins around the park area.Hence people tend to litter around the park, ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...tize these requests before the start of the summer season. This will allow children and adults of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, lastly, second, secondly, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93867924528 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4032868424 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617924528302 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5898542475 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5384615385 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286078892901 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908131847326 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055139463962 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170331415161 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036107716891 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.