Many small, local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. How does this affect local communities? How could this situation be improved?
Recently the phenomenon of large shopping malls impact on small shops has sparked a heated contentious debate. Although contested by many that large shopping malls are beneficial to local communities, an orbit of people are still favouring the small local shops which are benevolent to the society. Thus this essay will elaborate the myriad benefits of large shopping malls as well as the small shops by considering both the positive and negative influence on society and discuss the plan for situation improvement.
First and foremost, the multi-story shopping malls are located in prime location of many developed cities which are a centre point of the societies. This location supports them to attracts versatile nearby population for shopping. These shopping malls are having many facilities such as air-conditioned, multi-story parking and food court which are added advantages for shoppers. For example, the recent study shows many youths and middle-class people prefer to visit large shopping malls as it provides all facilities and all necessary requirements are under one roof, although this has many disadvantages as well like long queue for billing, high food prices etc.
On the flip side, the small shops and local market are also famous due to local presence and popularity of its market and people who prefer window shopping or bargaining prefer such shops and market. This market or shops also convenient to the local people due to low proximity also they provide door-step delivery in conditional cases. For instance, Delhi local market- Lajpat Nagar is still popular among many local due to its verities of food items, latest fashion items and the reasonable range of products. Thus this market will keep running until it provides them the customer.
To recapitulate, Large shopping malls and super-market are always outweigh the small shops in terms of product sell but this small shops still have popularity and will sustain in the current market trends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 315.0 242.827586207 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29841269841 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65512619988 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1840948103 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.083333333 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254693854542 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10900447987 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481763345139 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170626727566 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486308943759 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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