City council is planning to pull down one of the historic buildings in your town, because they do not have funds to renovate it. As a citizen, you don’t want it to happen. Write a letter to the city council and say
– What is the importance of the building?
– Why should it be renovated?
– Suggest a plan to raise funds and maintain the building in the future.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing this letter in order to express my objection regarding your decision to demolish the Stark building. As we all aware this building has great history behind it which connect to city patriots who fought against rebel fighters. This building is an iconic monument in the city which attracted thousands of tourist throughout last decades where it helped our local businessmen to develop their businesses. In a way it has strenghten local economy. And also our children will looked upon this building and will be proud about their ancestors.
When considering the above facts, if you proceed with the decision take down the building it will be massivly impact on local business and job market. Majority of local community is depending on earnings throught this, such as hotels, restuarents, local hand crafts and ornaments, giuded tours. Therefore I believe council need to revoke the decision and take necessary actions to renovate this dilapidated building.
I would like to suggest arrange car wash program to raise funds to renovate the biulding during every weekend at Public Market parking area, due to almost everyone live in the suburbs is visiting the market from their private vehicle. We will be able to cover considerable amount of renovation cost from this as a startup, where we can expand this in future phases.
I really appreciate if the city council take my points into consideratin in order preserve this building for futhure genrations and thanking you for taking your valuble time to read this letter.
Your Faithfully,
Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sir/Madam, Im writing this letter in order to express...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ecision to demolish the Stark building. As we all aware this building has great hi...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'look'
Suggestion: look
...cal economy. And also our children will looked upon this building and will be proud ab...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...job market. Majority of local community is depending on earnings throught this, such as hote...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...and crafts and ornaments, giuded tours. Therefore I believe council need to revoke the de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, regarding, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19921875 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59936503947 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6484375 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.549572648 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.916666667 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160985165989 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573917510971 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419521089881 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985727121109 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453735781425 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.