Environment and solutions
It is true that humans activities are contributing to the deterioration of the environment. In this essay, I will examine various ways of people debating the environment and propose several viable solutions to remedy these problems.
The humans are damaging the environment in numerous ways. Firstly, in the light of industrial revolution, mushrooming of factories and a lot of manufactures has driven air pollution an alarming level because of the increase in the emission such as carbon dioxide. monoxide released to the atmosphere. Moreover, population explosion results in excessive dependence on fossil fuel for cars, transports, railway,... There is a staggering increase in private car ownership, which leads to the number of greenhouse gases emitted from these machines with no sign of decreasing. In addition to air pollution, many manufacturers are contaminating the water sources as a lot of amount of waste is poured into rivers and oceans on daily basis. Finally, the number of animals are on the verge of extinction because deforestation has deprived them of their natural habitat.
Several solutions are to adopted to ease the aforementioned issues. On the governmental level, strict punishment should be administered to individuals and organizations that harm the environment. For example, authorities need to introduce laws to limit toxic fumes discharged from companies and encourage them to renewable energy to produce. In other ways, states should levy " green taxes" on vehicle ownership as cars or airline firms, which forces them to raise the prices for their customers and likely go up the number of people using public transport. On the personal level, everybody must proactively protect the environment by giving up habits that are detrimental to their surroundings. For instance, by giving up littering, people can create a positive impact on air pollution and water pollution, people should choose products with less packaging and recyclable as possible.
In conclusion, humans are to blame for various environmental problems, they should give measures to conserve the environment
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Monoxide
...in the emission such as carbon dioxide. monoxide released to the atmosphere. Moreover, p...
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Line 2, column 408, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ossil fuel for cars, transports, railway,... There is a staggering increase in pri...
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Line 2, column 660, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of amounts'.
Suggestion: a lot of amounts
... are contaminating the water sources as a lot of amount of waste is poured into rivers and ocea...
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Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: TO_TOO[5]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...natural habitat. Several solutions are to adopted to ease the aforementioned issu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53538461538 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14726367485 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606153846154 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1840363064 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159070490883 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539424424806 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854236491105 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116239596163 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653503985703 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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