It is said that in future the illiterate ones will not be those that did not read but those that did not learn.
Discuss what you understand by this statement and state the extent to which you agree with it.
Your Essay:
In bygone days people lived a simple life and did not gave concentration on education but now people are living in modern era many changes have taken place. Education is very important for any individuals. some people opinion that in future uneducated people will not be those that did not read but those that did not lean. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my point of views.
To begin with, education is very important part of life without education it is very difficult to survive. The first and foremost point is education is the combination of reading and learning. Reading is very significant to get knowledge about new things whereas the due to learning people can remember the large date with practice.
Moreover, for illiterate, both reading and learning is vital to survive. Illiterate person not have a great knowledge and its mind is not to much developed. If he can learn both things continuously he increased its mind power and he survive very well in the society.
As per my notion, education plays a vital role in society and without education it is very difficult to survive. Education gives lots of knowledge to any individual and with only reading and with only leaning it is very difficult to survive.
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- It is said that in future the illiterate ones will not be those that did not read but those that did not learn.Discuss what you understand by this statement and state the extent to which you agree with it.Your Essay: 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
... people lived a simple life and did not gave concentration on education but now peop...
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Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... is very important for any individuals. some people opinion that in future uneducate...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
... new things whereas the due to learning people can remember the large date with practi...
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Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...e a great knowledge and its mind is not to much developed. If he can learn both th...
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Line 9, column 234, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'survives'.
Suggestion: survives
...usly he increased its mind power and he survive very well in the society. As per...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aning it is very difficult to survive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95734597156 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68443984673 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521327014218 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8395264051 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166541059969 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651199585083 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781470673602 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972386564943 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060371452872 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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