Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary world, law plays a vital role. Law was created and invented to guide to the human beings. Due to the law, the nature of person is good against other. I believe law affect's human behavior. The punishment like imprisonment, life sentence as well as death sentences and people's are fear from them. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my point of views.
To begin with, people respect the law and following the law and all members of nations lived under the law. The first and foremost point is fines are possible to those, who breaking the laws. Some time people not follow the laws, for example, some time people's are not follow the red light role and drive their car or any other automobile at the time of red light that time they pay a desirable fine. Secondly,Punishment like life sentence and death sentences. People's are fear from this punishment and they do not put any wrong step and live under good condition and they do not do any kind of wrong task.
Moreover, law's are for betterment of the life. One person meet with other person good way. Due to law, our society won on corruption. People do not take corruption from other people and every person lives in a good atmosphere. People behavior become good. People do not park their vehicles in wrong side. If they park their automobiles in wrong side. They should be given fine.
To conclude, laws plays a significant role in our society and every lives under the law.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: followed
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...time they pay a desirable fine. Secondly,Punishment like life sentence and death sentences....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey do not do any kind of wrong task. Moreover, laws are for betterment of the...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mosphere. People behavior become good. People do not park their vehicles in wrong sid...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... not park their vehicles in wrong side. If they park their automobiles in wrong si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67953667954 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46959417016 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517374517375 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0433212009 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6 104.977214359 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.95 20.9669160288 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252402106807 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815469051254 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720438641554 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157132015501 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372362050018 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 12.6369458128 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 53.1260098522 143% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.9458128079 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 11.5310837438 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.32886699507 82% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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