Nowadays, many families migrate to other countries due to employment. Some people say it benefits the children of immigrants’ families. Other say it is more difficult for the children of these families. Discuss both views and give you opinion.
In the recent years, many people are moving to other countries in search of greener pastures (better opportunities). Experts in the field believe that this movement can either benefit the children of the immigrants or not live up to their expectations.This essay will weigh both the opinions presented and represent the author’s view of the abovementioned statement.
How it’s beneficial to the children – better education standard –Focus is on learning rather than studying. Children are exposed to different subjects via experiential learning and thereby get to choose their favourite subjects and purse whatever catches their fancy. As a part of their growing up, these children are exposure to various extra-curricular activities such as swimming, music, sports etc and if the children is naturally talented, they can go on to make a career out of it, which may not be possible in their home countries. Blend into the culture and be able to contribute to the economy because these young minds will be able to adapt to the new place better than their parents and in the process become valuable assets.
Adapting the new culture and environment, they might experience a culture shock and might not be able to fit into the local system. They often don’t understand the local language or may not be comfortable. This can lead of isolation and disinterest in regular life and also hamper their interactions with other children of the same age group. Often, it is observed that there is a cultural disconnection amongst the second generation as they try and blend in, they forget their roots and are unable to appreciate it.
In conclusion, it has been observed that there are benefits and drawbacks that the children of immigrants face, but this can be alleviated by the parents when they take a positive step towards bridging the gap and helping their children evolve with the new cultural environment and embrace the changes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12852664577 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88478591239 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567398119122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8903788458 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.727272727 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152765113968 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626582469475 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486844052476 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108092611812 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606772541298 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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