Parents should be help legally responsible for their children's acts. What is your opinion
The responsibility of the children are lies with their parents. Where a significant number of people think that the parents are questionable for the legal acts of their children, some asserts against this notion. In my opinion, it is responsibility of parents to take care their children and educate them with regard to positive and negative aspects of the decisions. This essay will elucidate further to the positive side with required arguments and examples.
There are myriads of example which can demonstrate that the parents are role models for their children. The most preponderant one is their upbringing. There are a plethora of incidents which either make or break the mentality of the children. Parents who spent more time with their children, can evaluate their behaviour and actions and can guide them for the decisions they are planning to take. However, parents should provide them eminent time and space, so that they can be self-dependent and can take their decisions.
Another pivotal point in support of the above-metioned points is schooling. Every parents want to arrange best of te things so that their children can grow further not personally but socially as well. Parents must watch the activities of their childs so that they could understand about their friend-cirlces. Moreover, it is possible that due to bad behaviour of any friend, they can adapt the wrong or some unethical practices which can affect them in long run. For example, if any child starts stealing the things, eventually get used to this bad habit.
In conclusion, we can say that parents must take care of their children and provide them adequate time and space so that they can be open with them and share the required things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...the above-metioned points is schooling. Every parents want to arrange best of te thin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 20.9802955665 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05244755245 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70131315611 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524475524476 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9915305622 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271014131986 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10552356507 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735498586336 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175650436993 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067124790793 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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