which should require more financial support from the government health or education. To what extent to you agree or disagree.
In this advanced technological environment education is required to everyone. Today’s students are the tomorrow citizens. Some people believe that government should support to the health of the people financially while others argue that education is more important than health. I strongly believe that education is more important than health, as health is also very important but when not when compares to education it is a first priority. The reasons are
Firstly, there are many advantages with providing the education to the poor people. It improves the country’s economy and welfare. Students with good education skills can work innovatively. These days many students are staring start-up’s by the help of the government and improving the economy of the country. For example, country like India is growing with the infrastructure and industrial are giving the chance to students with creative and innovative ideas and increasing the economically.
secondly, by spending the money on education helps to reduce the poverty rate in country, and also generates the employment opportunities to the students. According to the survey conducted by world education organization reported that countries like India and China are reduced the unemployment rate from 40% to 25% within a decade and improved the exports and reduced imports from other countries.
In conclusion, as education plays a vital role in countries development, government should spent more financials in educating the students other than health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Secondly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65800865801 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09162444582 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562770562771 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7463322549 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.916666667 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151694054276 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543558876122 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776964670423 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104466205323 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788798347601 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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