Telling the truth ?
In today's world speaking truth has became a myth .People are more comfortable in saying lies, doing so profits them .As far as I am concerned, saying truth is injurious as it cause lots of negative impact in people .Lies or white lies are more preferable ,which is generally followed in many business, saving people's life and in creating harmony between humans.
Most of the business policy is to attract the costumer, saying white lies benefits them as it creates the good impression to the people in buying theirs goods. People will be more attracted by theirs policies and they will agree in purchasing following company's goods .For example; In many advertisement, we see that celebrity are doing ads and they deceive people with their white lies. People are mostly affected by theirs advertisement and buys theirs goods. Business are in bottom line by applying white-lies policy. Not only in business world but also in human life white lies are followed.
Additionally, White lies are Occasionally accepted in saving people life and motivating people to do better in future .Creating a false illusion in people while being unable to accept the truth is essential in helping people to retain their good health. For instance; my cousin had an accident and doctor told that he can never walk again in his foot .But instead of telling a truth, we say white lie to his mother. Moreover, after a year my cousin was recovering in his health and his mom help him to gain a good health, which clearly portray the advantage of saying lies. If we had told the truth than his mother would have lost her sense and would not be able to help him in his bad times. White lies are also accepted in human relation as it does in saving a life of patients.
Finally ,Harmony is important in any relationship, speaking white lies can help in obtaining accord in human's life. Human life is combination of sorrow and happiness. People are not perfect, they do mistakes accidentally or intentionally but they are in aware of not hampering their relationship with theirs beloved. In such situation people tends to speak white lies in saving relations and in having a good harmony with each other.
In conclusion, reveling a truth is not profitable. For maintaining a healthy environment in between the people white lies is necessary, it might be false but it is a good way in saving business, people life and their relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82168674699 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64355470488 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510843373494 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.6382391502 48.9658058833 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.705882353 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4117647059 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105576649367 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396751522025 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699108641567 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668213973613 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576141730828 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.