The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
In the given statement it is said that the best ideas comes to us when we have a passionate interest in ordinary or everyday things around us. It is true that people always get inspired by their surrounding things and gain ideas by them only if they show interests.
We can take example of Wright brothers who invented plane. At that time one could not even think of flying in the sky but these brothers who got inspired by seeing the birds flying in the sky, invented plane. Seeing the bird flying in the sky was not enough for the invention, it also requires ideas which can only come from the passionate interest. Not everyone has this quality of passionate interest, because until Wright brothers discovered this nobody could imagined of flying into the sky. It is the passion and the determination to achieve the goal without being afraid of failure makes these type of men successful.
I too have a interest in painting which I developed during my childhood. My other used to make so many paintings and I used to observe her doing that. By seeing her i developed a passionate interest in painting and now I can paint anything like glass painting, fabric painting, canvas painting etc., which would not have been possible if I would have seen my mother doing this art. So, surging things does pay a vital role in developing passionate interest.
There are things which we cannot even think about without having seen them. So different people might have different commonplace things based on their location, financial status, or ease of approach. We cannot take commonplace things granted for all people. For example, a game called “gilli danda” which is played only in villages, children play this game because they can’t buy expensive bat and ball to play cricket or football. So, they invented this type of game to entertain themselves without having any need to invest anything. This could have been only possible because of their passion about playing game. In this game they need only one long stick to play.
I conclusion, truly the best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things but for this sometimes we also have to become part of mockery when we fail and sometimes it takes even years to implement ideas that we are very passionate about.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ble only because of the greatest ideas. If there were no ideas then there would ha...
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Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...always full of problems which we tackle everyday in every possible way. We always find e...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'tyre' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'tyres'.
Suggestion: tyres
... structure with two round shaped wooden tyre. This made their work easier. This was ...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...heir life. There are many times when i cannot get any idea of approaching a pa...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ea of approaching a particular problem. If I leave that problem thinking that I ca...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...m alone cannot give us way to solve it. While trying that problem in different way ca...
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of cellular mobiles. Noe everyone has a mobile according to their need. This inv...
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Line 7, column 522, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat. Failures are the means to success. If we will not fail we will not know how i...
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Line 7, column 563, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...f we will not fail we will not know how it it work. People should always have int...
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Line 7, column 569, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'works'?
Suggestion: works
...ill not fail we will not know how it it work. People should always have interest...
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Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'invested'.
Suggestion: invested
...ng, etc., but to gain something we have invest also.
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Line 9, column 268, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...., but to gain something we have invest also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 33.0505617978 209% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47916666667 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19772253789 2.79657885939 79% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469907407407 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.872874097 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.625 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 5.21951772744 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0602436808643 0.243740707755 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0203600363407 0.0831039109588 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348705751129 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0415985984052 0.150359130593 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311610938787 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 12.1639044944 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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