1 Topic : some people believe that internet will not change the trend of newspaper of getting news. Agree or disagree ?
It is argued that internet will not replace the tendency of obtaining news from the newspaper. I,however,firmly disagree to the statement because internet is fast,up to date,economical and environment-friendly.
It is apparent that internet is very fast and can easily access to any kind of news from nook and corner of the world.It is just a click away if anyone from india wants to know what is happening in the U.S.A. Thanks to the internet, which has made possible that seemed to be impossible a few year ago. Another important point why the internet will become popular source of reading news is that it is environment-friendly. As such,large number of trees are used to make a bundle of paper leading to deterimental effects on our environment. People,in general,but youngsters ,in purticular ,would not like to use newspaper to go through the news. For instance, a recent survey by HRD concluded that the number of newsreaders through tabloids is diminishing rapidly year by year.
What is more, internet is the first choice to read news for new generation. No-one can deny the fact that most of them use mobile phones to find out important news that can be about their favorite celebrity,history,culture,reputable colleges or universities. Admittidely,youth stay glued with their mobile phones as it is inexpensive for them & does not put extra burden on their pockets. It is proven that the greatest number of whatsapp, facebook ,instagram & twitter are also used by these millennials to send messages,information & news to their friends & near & dear ones. Hence,it is not difficult to understand that internet would become the darling object for the majority of the masses.
In conclusion,I would like to reiterate that gone are the days when newspaper was the main source of information.Now ,e-media would undoubtely expand its reach/ would touch its highest glory in the years to come & print media could become the thing of the past.
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| 2018-11-08 | Rajesh Poonia | 64 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in general, kind of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16139240506 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62036817183 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588607594937 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1750564458 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.461538462 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148913602695 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578418059314 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501076705356 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951216033448 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558837012195 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.