In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Remote working has been increasing due to computers, internet and gadgets which could be accessed everywhere in recent years. In this essay, I intend to discuss some of the positive and negative aspects of this trend.
Chief among the advantages of this development is saving time and energy resources. Commuting hours have been boosted because of urban sprawl, mostly business areas are built in downtown far from employees’ houses. Moreover, organizations and offices with lots of rooms consume huge amount of energy such as electricity, gasses and water. By omitting these wasted property, efficiency would improve Reducing air pollution and traffic congestion especially in rush hour that happen at the beginning and ending work time are connected to this item. Besides, jobholders could wear whatever they want, consequently, feeling calmness that prepare them a friendly environment to work.
At the same time, theses phenomenon can be extremely negative. First of all, times which are devoted to our family or work undoubtedly will be mixed. Time managing is a difficult task and most people fail. As a result, managers and be loved ones both are unsatisfied. Secondly, loneliness and being isolated would definitely happened when you are not supposed to be present among your colleagues. The last not the least is lack of discipline. Staff who are not forced to be at a specific place or time and follow related rules could not be trusted to follow schedule.
In conclusion, remote working will have both advantages and disadvantages for individuals and employer, and to use the most of this development both groups should consider many parameters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...ess and being isolated would definitely happened when you are not supposed to be present...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29056603774 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84640386311 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667924528302 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5277204935 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190826178446 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552163064181 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544590238265 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123418741498 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523412413448 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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