The chart below shows the process of making fruit cans.
The provided flow chart illustrates the stages to produce fruit cans.
Overall, it can be seen that there are a total of 14 steps, starting with hand picking the fruits and ending with the delivery to the consumers.
Firstly, the fruits are picked from the trees by hand then transport to the factories. Secondly, they are rinsed with water. Next, they go through a quality check to get rid of the bad fruits and transfer the good ones to the cooler at 0 degree temperature. After that, the fruits are weighted, graded, and peeled.
After the skin removal stage, they are then cored and sliced into smaller pieces. Next, the sliced fruits are divided into the cans by a machine. The cans are sealed and cooked, as well as sterilized. The last few steps after sterilized, the cans are labeled and transferred to the storage. The final products are shipped to the consumers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
...verall, it can be seen that there are a total of 14 steps, starting with hand picking...
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Line 6, column 292, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...labeled and transferred to the storage. The final products are shipped to the consu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76470588235 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37764806137 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2108241137 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2727272727 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137048980641 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527212256571 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071360428602 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105586663665 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884701354827 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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