You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
• Say where you are going
• Describe your house
• Explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house
Dear Max,
Hope you and your family are all well. I would like to thank you for accepting my request to look after my house during the next week.
I am leaving for Tasmania on coming Monday for a week for inspecting one of the company’s offices in Hobart. I will be staying in the Holiday Inn hotel and you can contact me via phone in case of an emergency.
My current house is on the same street where I stayed earlier but this house is fairly smaller than the previous one. It has an open kitchen cum living room, a dining room and two bedrooms at the end of the house with ensuite bathrooms. You can use in the guest room which is next to the dining room. Also, there is a small backyard which I converted into a garden with lots of plants.
The only things I would like you to do is to put the bins out on Wednesday for the garbage truck to collect it and water the plants every alternate day. Also, before leaving the house make sure the gas is turned off.
I have stocked the groceries for the next week and if you are coming on Monday morning instead of Sunday night then please collect the keys from my old neighbour Mrs Smith. I have a flight to catch in the morning so I will leave the house early but I will give you a call before leaving. Also, let me know if you need anything from Tasmania.
I hope to meet you before leaving.
Best wishes,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r Tasmania on coming Monday for a week. I always wanted to visit this island to e...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...;s offices in Hobart, the capital city. I will be staying in the Holiday Inn hote...
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Line 11, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tocked the groceries for the next week. If you are coming on Monday morning instea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 287.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28222996516 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16556619422 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7088511382 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2941176471 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05882352941 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220687460163 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643218687609 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520898129629 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114621165689 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06331034557 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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