Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
There has been a spur of sporting events and all most every country participates in it. Some people believe that such tournaments play a vital role in mitigating international disputes and also contributes to the development of jingoism. However, I think these events contributes to more tensions rather than instilling harmony among nations.
Sports have become a place where warring countries project their power. Loosing in these events brings a feeling of embarrassment. Furthermore, the winning countries leave no stone unturned to disgrace the defeated country. For instance, a cricket match between the countries of India and Pakistan is no less than a war zone. There have been reports of players houses being vandalized by supporters of the defeated country to express their anger. Therefore, I don’t see how sports can unite countries.
On the other hand, sports can in some situation can help in curbing disputes between countries. Most of the time the citizen of disputed nations has never met. They are unaware of each other’s culture and ideology. So, they don’t realize that tensions are between the governments and not amongst them. This gap is filled when these people travel to each other’s country to watch the tournament and get to know each other thereby promoting peace and feeling a brotherhood. Hence, it can be said that tournaments also help in bring peace.
All in all, according to me, I strongly believe that sports cannot bring countries closer as I have never come across such a scenario is the real world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, so, still, therefore, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21739130435 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79439651952 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1216079323 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0971753917209 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304989317109 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225293607979 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589426012259 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246990918416 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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