Now a day’s people are spending too much time in work it that extent that they hardly have time to discuss about personal life discuss

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Now a day’s people are spending too much time in work it that extent that they hardly have time to discuss about personal life discuss

In current contemporary world every individual is working so hard that they are not investing decent amount of time to his personal family life, many conflicts are raised in small and medium size families which are leads to disunite. In this essay I will discuss the reason why an individual is not able to spend time with family and way to egress out of this situation.

Many organizations are making most of their employees to work late by assigning them tasks which cannot be achieved with in time span that is allocated, this is the primary reason for an individual to stay late for work and he is investing his sweat and blood to meet the targets. Many more employees are losing their personal life and unable to spend time with their family. In some other cases employees were asked to work in a different time zone that is completely opposite to his time zone thus dedicating his whole life to organization and its benefits and personally he is ruining his health and personal life.

There are some effective ways to grip this situation, fewer are managing once professional life by adhering to the laws of labor thus effective working hours will be under control and employees should manage round-robin work shift system to late night work schedules this way every employee will spend some decent time with family. Alternately every organization should encourage employees to avail some yearend vacation rather than making work for whole year, Making such policies will enable employees to spend good amount of time with family, moreover employee feel refreshed and added enthusiasm when he gets some break in regular work life he can be being some value added innovation to organization benefit.

In my opinion primarily employee who should dedicate time to his family and have good personal life by managing the work life so that he can lead prosper life with good financial benefits for organization too.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 600, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oyee feel refreshed and added enthusiasm when he gets some break in regular work ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 324.0 242.827586207 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9475308642 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51663229718 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493827160494 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.5024630542 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.8562743986 50.4703680194 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 200.375 104.977214359 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.5 20.9669160288 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249047860508 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133715152248 0.0925447433944 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408739282267 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174393670591 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381009621809 0.0609392437508 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 12.6369458128 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 53.1260098522 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.9458128079 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.3980295567 173% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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