Xenophobia is increasing in developing countries agree or disagree
Recent days the Xenophobia is raising in western countries there may be many reason for, ideally it should be responsibility of both government and individual to curtail this, In this essay I will stress more on the reasons for Xenophobia in an individual and will share the solutions to curb it.
An individual in a particular region or country will have more authority as he is born and brought up here when an immigrant lands and starts grabbing the jobs then this xenophobia tends to raise as the fear of losing the income that will hit his economic life and this will add a huge competition to secure and retain his job, Also down fall in the perks and allowance related to salaries as the immigrants will work for lesser salaries and for more number of hours each day has add more fuel to this xenophobia. Also forming individual groups from the country of origin will also affect the diversity as the local people feel their traditions are being dominated by the immigrants.
It should be the primary responsibility of the government to educate local people with the advantages of inviting other nation people to stay, work, live in once country will bring more advancements in the technology and medical sciences, Government should start imposing stringent rules such as imprisonment and hefty penalties to arrest such xenophobia characteristics an additional measure it can reserve some percentage of jobs for the local people this can suppress some extent of xenophobia. Adding some individual responsibility as they should respect, and one should understand that a person has become an immigrant to have better career and much prosperous living without any hassles also individual can share their traditions to local people to seek more respect.
So, in conclusion the rate of xenophobia can be arrested with help if both government and individual contributions
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many reasons
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Suggestion: added
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 6.10837438424 295% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 310.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07096774194 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8566150843 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.5024630542 249% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.495477968 50.4703680194 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.0 104.977214359 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.6666666667 20.9669160288 246% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100468285713 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588359856062 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307864688991 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731346141456 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169966254782 0.0609392437508 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 12.6369458128 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 53.1260098522 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.54236453202 243% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.9458128079 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.94827586207 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.3980295567 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.5123152709 295% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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