Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Today, we can see many famous people who are well-known to the world and who receive much higher salaries per year. Popular athletes in sports, fabulous entertainers in numerous performance areas and experienced artists/actors in cinema are just to name a few of recognized figures in the world. In my paper, I will be discussing mainly about Soccer Stars whose names people know around the globe at their early ages and Stars who earn a lot of money. As I am very familiar and close to soccer, I think these athletes deserve to have such salaries every year because of their hard effort, excellent performances in games/matches and high reputation.
Firstly, becoming a star in soccer is not easy. It seems easier said than done; famous soccer players have put in enormous physical and mental effort. By physical effort, they have spent and still spend hours of time for training, exercising, and preparing themselves to become energetic, a tactical figure and a player who can perform well during 90 minute period and sometimes 120 minutes. To achieve all of these will take a potential soccer star numbers of years. In addition to physical performance, they are also supposed to learn how to be strong mentally when they play games in teams. It is very challenging to develop mental stability and readiness before each game. The success will show off only when players have passed through those difficulties.
Secondly, soccer stars play in each match at their best performance level so that the fans enjoy from watching the games lively. For example, Lionel Messi, Neymar Junior and Cristiano Ronaldo are the best and the famous players who show such an amazing game with incredible tricks, moments, kicks and so on. This can be seen in the results of team’s match. They in the most matches of each season score goals and that is what the fans want to see. For instance, even if a chance is not created by the team members, these stars themselves create such chances of scoring and lead the team ahead. The games are very interesting and intense when famous players play and they can make “the impossible” possible with unbelievable and super performance. So, they deserve to earn the amount of salary they signed on the contract.
Lastly, famous people are known for their reputation around the world. They are like role models and celebrity figures for people around the world. Because of their reputation, they are able to inspire, urge, give perspectives and etc. An example can be an advertisement in which a well-known soccer player introduces a product. Having a famous figure in this advertisement will make a great change in people’s choices they make because of the reputation.
In short, the way the famous athletes went through to be who they are right now, the way they amuse people with incredible games and the way they influence people worldwide explain why they deserve to earn millions of dollars in a year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2458.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93574297189 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64895896477 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528112449799 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 756.0 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5064248479 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.416666667 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15595085706 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424969142216 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540640723874 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099899309786 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658987335524 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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