It is the natural process for animal species to become extinct (such as dinosaurs), so there is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly believed that humans should not intervene with the extinction of some species such as dinosaurs as it is a natural selection. In my opinion, I believe this statement is true in many aspects.
On the one hand, the process of some animals’ eradication is usually beyond humans’ ability to interfere with. Indeed, the selection of nature to eliminate several species from the Earth often comes with disastrous global-scaled phenomena. For example, dinosaurs were completely erased from existence billions of years ago by the asteroid impacts which are completely out of humans’ hand. Therefore, if some species become extinct due to similar causes in the future, people should not look for any solution either as any attempts will be of futility. Furthermore, people’s lives will also be threatened by these phenomena. Thus, while humans are busy evacuating to save their own lives, they will not have any time to care for the animals.
On the other hand, nature has chosen to eliminate some animals from earth to biasedly favor the survival of mankind. Some species such as giant mammutes would have become a serious threat to human lives if they had been left survived by nature. It can be easily imagined the extremely dangerous risk when animals from the ice age co-exist with humans in today’s world. This is why people should never prevent the natural extinction of some animals because human lives would be in danger in the future.
In conclusion, I assert that there are valid reasons why people should never try to stop the natural process for some animal species to become extinct.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11194029851 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6882768192 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.922857142 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.384615385 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317518875709 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119458518341 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10686472062 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238597664143 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100905135415 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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