In developing countries, tourism has disadvantages or advantages?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact that tourism industry is beneficial for developing nations to build strong economy. Critics, however, claim that for most of the underdeveloped natiions tourism is not the priority thing to be considered. I, personally believe that former statement is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the important features to support the importance of tourism in developing nations before deducing any conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of argument discussing the fact tourism promotes the nation’s economy in effective way. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that tourism is the way to build strong relation with developed countries and it would be highly beneficial for that nations who are struggling for success. As a prime example, the best tourist spot, Thailand has maintained it’s name just because of tourism industry and become flourish day by day.
On the other hand, another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that tourist from all over the world can be able to collect plethora of amazing facts about other’s cultures. Moreover, people from all around the world get a chance to meet diversity of different cultures and rituals.
To recapitulate. foregoing discussion propounds that tourism industry is not only the way to promote relations with other nations but also the way to learn cultural diversity. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefit would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34136546185 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80631236797 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1575471262 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.909090909 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140760555238 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494007528008 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467334151566 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820571046772 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632576542214 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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