Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
The advancement of technology has enormously altered every individual's life where as many people thinks it brought many environmental related difficulties while other claims that the technology is the solution to reduce the climate concerns. so this essay will articulates the both argument in details and states opinion regarding this.
To embark on, the development of technology had made our life very readily because in a contemporary era everyone has their smartphones where everyone can search arbitrarily and the advancement of various gadgets availing as well as fulfilling the people's necessity. However, in many industries various machines saves the opponent's time efficiency and also technology is a better way to overcome the environmental issues. this can be clear from a instance. recently, Amazonia company announced that mode of transport which does not need any fuel combustion energy only require a solar energy which would be proven, this sort of technology to conquer the environmental problems.
To the contrarily, the technology is becoming advantageous for everyone and also it has a such devastating consequences where no one could imagine. vividly, numerous electronic gadgets are getting unuseful just because of advancement of technology where people throws those old electronic equipments outskirts of the city just to get to rid of it where it is indeedy their electronic components and parts are causing the contamination to climate. due to this numerous people are getting ill and it acidify the drinkable water. Another example of this nuclear reactor is a better source to produce electricity but it has various detrimental and hazardous issues to the environment.
To sum up, it is evident technology is a kind of bless to our people but it has brought pretty climate issues due to which, government should have solution to overcome this sort of problem and also people should recycle the old electronic stuff by contacting the manufacturing company
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- Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and giv 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, well, while, kind of, sort of, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04514078725 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551612903226 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.4600741903 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.181818182 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189674495514 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668330490999 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460961629239 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112602079399 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396011337981 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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