Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether you support them or not
Dangerous activities or extreme sports is very dangerous and popular nowdays and the all credits goes to movies because they show not dangerous and sees like easy. But some of the people says it is very risky not easy to do it. In further paragraph I will discuss both view points.
On the one hand, to do this activity people have build up our confidence level and these sports is also help to increase physical fitness. Some people have fear to do these extreme sports but once they go and then they cannot look back. The professional players have name and fame all over the world. Also, have good opportunity to do governments jobs.
On the other hand, this activity is very risky and also person get died while doing. For example last years Australian professional player Austin nathues was died while doing paragliding they fall on the ground. These activities were not easy as they see.
To conclude that, these activities are have major safety concerns so do it in when you know about all or practice it then do it in under the supervision of any guardians which knows everything about these activites.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...w not dangerous and sees like easy. But some of the people says it is very risky not easy ...
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Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...some of the people says it is very risky not easy to do it. In further paragraph ...
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Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
...nfidence level and these sports is also help to increase physical fitness. Some peop...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... To conclude that, these activities are have major safety concerns so do it in when ...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
... you know about all or practice it then do it in under the supervision of any guar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, then, while, for example, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 1207.87684729 76% => OK
No of words: 195.0 242.827586207 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71794871795 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39726997918 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610256410256 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 379.143842365 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3121590404 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6363636364 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111178674793 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408342269576 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610672631287 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731634414303 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503461388103 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.32886699507 83% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 55.0591133005 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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