The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world spends numerous government expenditures. This money should be use in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Old building are the pride of the many cities which predominately has become a tourism attraction.this topic asserts that the reconstruction of historical building in metro cities, many local communities spend lot of money to preserve but those money should be use for maintain the road and new building development so this essay is partially agree with this sort of notion and enunciates about this below.
To embark, in numerous cities have old buildings which are the magnificence of the many cities. Consequently, many people tend to see old building and it has become a vogue of every geographical part of the world . Indeedy, many archeologists are very keen to see historical building and their enthusiasm about to know history behind the old building where they can write a plenty of blogs regarding old buildings and widespread it in many parts of the world. Due to this every city could have fame regarding it. For example in Egypt there is often many artifacts or many antiques use to see in old pyramids where many archaeologist are crazy about it or even they tend to spend large amount of money to see these things, that money goes to the government's budget.
On the other side, construction of roads and development of new magnificent building is necessary of every major city. Generally speaking if this not happen there is no even valuable to see old historical building where undeveloped roads may be inconvenient for visitors who come from overseas. So the outlay of government is necessary to maintain the roads where it could be accessible for tourists.
And also on new buildings such as shopping malls, art galleries etc. For example in Amritsar city there is now new transport bridge is announced by local authority which is proven for people who come from distant routs as well as beauty Amritsar mall is provides the many attraction to tourists.
In summary, goverment should spend their expenditure to control the undeveloped roads as well as new buildings and also their consumption should be on preserving the historical building.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
...ties spend lot of money to preserve but those money should be use for maintain the road and...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...y to preserve but those money should be use for maintain the road and new building ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... of every geographical part of the world . Indeedy, many archeologists are very ke...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...s often many artifacts or many antiques use to see in old pyramids where many archa...
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Line 3, column 615, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun archaeologist seems to be countable; consider using: 'many archaeologists'.
Suggestion: many archaeologists
...tiques use to see in old pyramids where many archaeologist are crazy about it or even they tend to...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun attraction seems to be countable; consider using: 'many attractions'.
Suggestion: many attractions
...as beauty Amritsar mall is provides the many attraction to tourists. In summary, goverment s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, in summary, sort of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01453488372 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85161123235 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494186046512 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.0619013391 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.75 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304699394457 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119816057779 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591328060655 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175811240393 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676974681873 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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