Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do you support it or not?
It is argued that successful sports personalities and film stars can be looked as a role model for the youth. This essay disagrees with this statement and believes that doing so may not be in the best interests of the younger generation. The essay will first discuss the potential negative impact that mirroring sports personalities and film stars can have, along with supporting arguments, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why we should not look up to sportsmen and role models. But the most notable one stems from the fact that only the bright side of their success is portrayed. As an example, a person who has attained any level of success in sports will have had to put in years of rigorous effort and practice to be great at their craft. Moreover, this hard work is often not shown to the youngsters thus showing only the attractive part of their lifestyles.
Some may offer a contrary argument, noting the achievements of such famous people is worthy of a fan following. However, it also needs to be taken into consideration the undesirable habits like drinking and smoking of film stars are often shown in their movies. The most concerning aspect about this fact is young people may not be able to distinguish between a good and bad behaviour, leading them to believe that such activities can be carried out by them as well. This idea is completely unacceptable, as it can impact the development of youngsters for the negative.
Taking into account the arguments discussed, we can conclude that successful sports stars and glamorous film stars may not be the best role model for youngsters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'offers'.
Suggestion: offers
...ve part of their lifestyles. Some may offer a contrary argument, noting the achieve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86120996441 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72185931473 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569395017794 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4434923704 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311670129233 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115776492721 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15747666221 0.071462118173 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231849917927 0.151781067708 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178152702848 0.0609392437508 292% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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