Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?
From 1980s to now, there is a sharp rise in obese people. Lots of people blame meat for causing this problem. That is why they opine that everyone should have a vegetarian diet. While I believe that a vegetarian diet is good, I still think that eating meat in moderation is very significant.
In the first place, a vegetarian diet is a good idea for people especially for the young. Obviously, in vegetables such as cabbages, onions, carrots and so on, there are various kinds of vitamins and minerals. Indeed, vitamins D,B1 are very essential for bodies. Without them, the development of skin, bones as well as the speed of blood circulation will be badly affected. For instance, most people suffer from heart disease and diabetes because they do not eat vegetables and fruits. Futhermore, doctors said that fruits have more nitrients than any sustenances. Eating grapes and tomatoes will help tighten and soften skin, will make women more beautiful. Particularly, a vegetarian diet often gives people energy but it does not make them fat. That is why the young tend to eat more vegetables and fruits to have perfect bodies.
Nonetheless, eating meat in limitation is also very necessary. Meat can provide people with more lipit and protein than vegetables and fruits. In addition, eating meat will help people get more energy for study and work. As long as people eat it effectively, nothing will happen and nobody will be fat.
To sum up, I think that a vegetarian diet is vital but people should eat meat in moderation to have a better health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nonetheless, so, still, well, while, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92075471698 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57077808541 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539622641509 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.52324325 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.4444444444 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7222222222 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225781489559 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746101231887 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709131777799 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174438098863 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676107342994 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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