Many people think that public celebration (like national holidays, festivals etc.) are a waste of money and that the government should spend those funds in a better way. Do you agree or disagree.
It is thought by some people that money allocated for commemoration of important events such as national holidays and festivals is misspent and governments should invest that money on profitable issues. I completely disagree with this point of view.
National holidays are signs of culture and civilization in each country and reflect their beliefs and ideas. These events create a livelihood environment and attract lots of tourists which could be a source of income for the local people. In addition, occasions like festivals bring people together no matter what is their religion or race. Even they put aside their conflicts and cooperate for one goal which is showing best of them to the public. So not only budget spend on public celebration is not wasted but also it can provide opportunities to make it double. For example, Iranian people celebrate last Wednesday of the year all over the country which is involved jumping over the fire and make best wishes for each other. They believe fire could take sickness and bring health to people around it.
I also disagree with the idea that the amount of money government has allocated to public events should be consumed for other issues. Most of public holidays are national heritage of our ancestors and keeping them alive and also delivering to next generation are government’s obligation. They should teach people how to value them instead of thinking to abolishing them because next generation need them for showing their culture, identity and feeling proud in front of other nationalities.
In conclusion, although expenses of public holidays seems inconvenient for some, we should look beneath the surface and consider all aspects of them and try to make the most of the chances they could bring for the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10616438356 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68506036523 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8885147637 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179602664753 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658836943004 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533976603257 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112346661275 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446888340415 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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