Juvenile delinquency is increasing and becomes more and more serious in the modern society. What are the reasons? And give some solutions to this problem.
These few decades have seen an upsurge in the number of young criminals, which is the most challenging problem facing the entire society. My essay will discuss about the main causes and suggest two efficacious solutions to this issue.
First and foremost, family background is the fist reason which leads to juvenile delinquency. Many youngsters have to suffer from family violence, divorce, and their parents may set a bad sample for them such as drunk, larceny or murderer. This will definitely exert a negative impact on their cognitive development. Furthermore, poverty is also another motive for crime. When the parents find it impossible to afford their own basic needs, the children are more likely to become a shoplifting or a fraud. This situation of their family also can make them feel embarrassed, lack of confidence as they are in the period of building their-esteem, which can intensify the possibility of being criminal with the aim of not only meeting their daily demands but also proving themselves with their peers.
Another noteworthy point is that being youngster is a really tough period on the grounds that they have to deal with their emotions, their conflicts at school with friends. Besides, it is commonly known that adolescents also have to face with the contrary between themselves and their family especially when their parents always impose strict rules on them and forbidden them to do what they want, to follow their passions. As a result, they tend to be defiant, to rebel and easily turn to a career of crime.
Therefore, people should take proactive measures to diminish the seriousness of this problem. Initially, family should have positive attitudes towards to society with a view to showing their kids proper values, norms and standards of the society, which can be a motivation for them to behave positively. In addition, it is essential for the government to increase the welfare provision to struggling family to satisfy their basic needs so that it can decrease the likelihood of embarking on criminal path by means of robbing. Finally, parents also should engage in more activities with their children to understand them, communicate with them and help them overcome their hardships.
To sum up, I believe that all members of the society from the authorities to the families have to take actions to avoid breeding future offenders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, therefore, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11794871795 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68871066182 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571794871795 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.078318202 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.099923648507 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386906040178 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389720841573 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054229408565 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400959071999 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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