The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.
What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Non- profit organization are raising awareness that smoking could have detrimental effect on one’s body. However, peoples already realized “What damage it does”, but still many of them continue to smoke. In my opinion, Educating people about the health benefits of reducing the smoking, can have some positive results.
Firstly, Most of the people are known about smoking and “What it does to their internal organs”. People who are smoking on a daily basis suffers from many health issues such as: Lung cancer, Damage to internal organs and Neurological problems. Regular smoking can also reduce one’s life span, mostly suffering from lung cancer. Meanwhile, Air exhaled after smoking can be inhaled by non-smokers which would also cause some health issues.
Secondly, Government should needs to enforce some regulations on smoking, and raise more awareness For example: Camping, and Educating people about damage it does to organs. Moreover, reducing smoke will aids one’s well-being. Advertising is also another form of communication to peoples Like: Buses, movies and Radio. If Government refuses to take responsibilities, it could have catastrophic effects on people’s life. Finally, raising awareness is the crucial part in reduction of smoke.
In conclusion, although many of the people are aware about effects. Some people are still habituated like addicted. Smoking can be reduced with the help of Government as well as people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'aid'
Suggestion: aid
...o organs. Moreover, reducing smoke will aids one's well-being. Advertising is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64125560538 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.868784795 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62331838565 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3567612718 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8666666667 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211540094263 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083205532207 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047443410121 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148871594994 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301213468521 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.84 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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