some people think laws change human behavior.do you agree?
Recently the phenomenon of government law changes human behavior has sparked a heated debate. Some people opine that laws change human behavior, while others assert that human behavior cannot be changed. I profoundly agree with the former view. This essay will discuss both sides of compelling arguments and thus will lead to logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments in favour of my stance, the most preponderant one is that there is a drastic change in behaviour and thinking patterns in people because of the stringent laws imposed by the government. Individuals do not commit adultery, murder, steal due to the laws. For example, in Saudi arabia, when government decided to impose fines and lashes for people who commit adultery, there has been a drastic decrease in the crime. As a result, people get away from doing criminal offenses.
On the darker side, opponents argue against this statement asserting that people commit crimes even though they are aware of the laws because of their human nature. Moreover, humans cannot change such behaviours due to laws, as it is heredity and they commit crimes always in spite of the severe punishments. For instance, human beings steal things and such behaviour has seen from their parents or relatives which cannot be changed. Hence, as every person should take action themselves to change their behaviour and attitudes.
In recapitulation, this essay has discussed both sides of the arguments. In my opinion, since there are governments to impose laws to change our behaviour, we humans should also think to change our minds first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ehaviours due to laws, as it is heredity and they commit crimes always in spite o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1641221374 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56765855637 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.71428571429 350% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8301930684 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6428571429 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371712610638 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11739994391 0.0925447433944 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110909405281 0.071462118173 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216940395161 0.151781067708 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940792574713 0.0609392437508 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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