It is common that most people is in poor health. Outline how people can change their lifestyles and how nation can adjust the health care system to tackle this issue.
The important effect of common people that most is in poor in health was always debatable has now become more controversal. The sunstantial influence of many people have poor health in our community has sparked the controversay over the potential impact of this trend on poor health in recent year. It can be agreed that poor health lead to a various diseases in human. This esssay will elaborate how people should change in their life styel and how nation can can adjust the care system to tackle this issue and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why most of people have poor health but the most conspicious one steam's from the fact that people should give attention on their daily routine such as, eating, exercise, physical activity etc. As an illustration, people should eat healthy food and pure water which helps to be healthy. In addition, a current research shows in America ten people died in 2017 due to poor health. Thus, people should be aware about their poor health and they should go to visit doctor for whole body check up in every 6 month.
Another key of justification for upholding this notion is that nation should give special education related to good health in community. For instance nation should do survey about people health status and they can implement some good work for example, conducting free health camp, providing health education in public and in school etc.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of most people have poor health is prominent and people should give more focous on their own health status and also nation should do research in people health condition and implement the treatment of poor health people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 458, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: can
...ange in their life styel and how nation can can adjust the care system to tackle this i...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...e outset, there are numerous reason why most of people have poor health but the most conspicio...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'current research'.
Suggestion: current research
...which helps to be healthy. In addition, a current research shows in America ten people died in 201...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 6.10837438424 262% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86868686869 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3514752331 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542087542088 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6314283801 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.454545455 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.511075281559 0.242375264174 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202486724057 0.0925447433944 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102413498808 0.071462118173 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333987325382 0.151781067708 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135014375672 0.0609392437508 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 53.1260098522 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.