Some people work for long hours and hard to achieve success and some give importance to free time for them. Give your opinion and discuss your views.
Recently, the phenomenon of full time employment and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of hard working is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that efficient management of working hours can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, high gained career can provide the society with some noticeable effects which rooted in the fact that the merits of the occupational structure, as well as the intriguing working environment, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the long time engagement and success. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of both full-time jobs and salient facts of work apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, less achievement of hard work might increase the consequence of boring jobs. Moreover, fundamental aspects of traditional working methods would relate to this reality that the demerits of low-paid workers pertain less job satisfaction. As an example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of break times is correlated negatively with beneficial results. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of personal life.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of successful jobs far weigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of working place prove the significance of free time, but also pinpoint long- term implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
Recently, the phenomenon of full time employment and its corresponding impact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53007518797 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16243184627 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672932330827 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5936890183 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.583333333 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160250670345 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515841460693 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295125188743 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900134171625 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109148106293 0.0609392437508 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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