What is the best invention of last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics, the airplane, and explain why?
Recently, the phenomenon of most useful invention of century and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of the computer invention is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that airplane traveling can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, innovative phenomenon can provide the society with some noticeable effects which rooted in the fact that the merits of creative thinking, as well as great ideas, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the intriguing results of best century innovative phenomenon. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of both computer benefits and precious appliance apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, technology amusement might increase the consequence of loss of humanity senses. Moreover, fundamental aspects of new-brand technology addiction would relate to this reality that the demerits of time-lost pertain to decreasing energy and humor. As an example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of bad antibiotics treatments is correlated negatively with health care. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of destructive ideas.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of profitable innovations far weigh its drawbacks. Not only do advantages of flying prove the significance of high level sanitation, but also pinpoint long-term implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...which discovered the intriguing results of best century innovative phenomenon. Thus, th...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...computer benefits and precious appliance apparently can be seen. Within the re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75095785441 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23051901988 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681992337165 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9541579764 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.083333333 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0308832841758 0.242375264174 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00965277762997 0.0925447433944 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0168350917823 0.071462118173 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.016537709853 0.151781067708 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190868133206 0.0609392437508 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.03 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 55.0591133005 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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