It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools.
What do you think?
Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Exercising regularly keeps an individual healthy and active and it is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, I think that it is good to make physical education and sport compulsory for all students in all schools. I will put forward the reasons below supporting this view point.
Physical education imparts the necessary knowledge to students who can learn the importance of following a healthy routine and makes them take conscious steps towards it. Schools which offer education coupled up with sport activities keeps the students healthy and active compared to those who follow a sedentary lifestyle. In the recent times, it has been observed that children and teenagers are at high risk of becoming obese due to lack of any kind of physical activity and long study hours. According to the latest survey by a World Health Organisation (WHO), 70% of children falling within the age bracket of 10-19 years have serious health issues such as hypertension, high cholesterol resulting into drastic weight gain etc. Physical education helps students to stay healthy as it would inculcate the habbits of differentiating between the various food options available and how the right choice can impact their physical and mental state of being. Similarly, sports would make the students remain active mentally as well as physically apart from being a fun activity.
Taking into consideration the aforementioned points, I conclude that it is extremely essential to make physical education and sports compulsory for children and teenagers and every school must include it as part of their curriculum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, therefore, well, apart from, i think, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30888030888 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79606531514 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1860884067 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299900479773 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12911106178 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143322978906 0.0667982634062 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248479266874 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155001783142 0.056905535591 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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