Governments should reduce their investments in arts, music, and painting. Do you agree or disagree?
Governments in many countries are spending an enormous sum of money in arts, music, and painting. While some people consider this expenditure as an unworthy investment, others believe that it is necessary. In my opinion, investing money in the arts and paintings is a good move and should be encouraged for reasons depicted in this essay.
The cultural arts are dying down in our nation and it is important that the government shed some money to save it. As people are forgetting our history, it is these mediums that convey us how our ancestors lived in the past and how this nation was built. They also play an important role in leisure. It is through music and drama people, especially in busy urban places find their peace of mind. Thus, it is imperative we keep them alive through aid from the government.
Moreover, the arts, music and painting are a symbol of our culture that must be preserved. These are unique to our place and form a symbol of our identity. For example, people from abroad visit our land to enjoy something that is very esoteric. If we preserve our heritage and develop them through proper funding, it will not just bring pride but in turn boost the tourism in our country.
In conclusion, I completely agree to the fact that investing lots of money in the arts is not just important but beneficial to the people in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69583333333 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51947621871 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570833333333 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2692071151 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6923076923 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130972376581 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473412972992 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624495349738 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832948871971 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046054582232 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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