Many people choose to emigrate to other countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a foreign country? Discuss with your own experience.
The importance of immigration to other countries, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of immigration has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on our world, lives and society in recent years. It can be agreed that there are lots of advantages of living in a foreign country, but it has some drawback as well. This essay will elaborate both the positive and negative impacts of this issue and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous ways to explain why living in another country has plenty of advantages, but the most conspicuous one is rooted in the fact that living in foreign country helps to improve culture's communications, which it helps allows to develop a multi-culture society and people from overseas get the chance to experience different society and culture. Thus, it is apparent that living in a foreign country has quite a few advantages.
Nevertheless, opponents of this trend tend to believe that in some cases living in a foreign country also has disadvantages, which people from overseas might be facing to racists problem. For example, according to a new research from Harvard University, 90% of immigrants had experienced racists and culture shock. Therefore, it is obviously true that living in a foreign country also has drawbacks.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can be concluded that living in a foreign country is prominent, although it has a number of drawbacks that should be well handled by the government and organizations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'developing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: developing
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'new research'.
Suggestion: new research
...ists problem. For example, according to a new research from Harvard University, 90% of immigra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14341085271 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99908094409 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554263565891 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3560692266 50.4703680194 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.7 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19975478685 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852744843436 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545751184404 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116508705382 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274552419449 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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