National happiness index has better performance than the economic increase in a nation's development. Do you agree and how to measure national happiness?
Recently the phenomenon of national happiness and its corresponding impacts on nation's development has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that economic growth performance cannot be highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that there are many ways to measure the national happiness and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support the performance of national happiness index on society members. At first, a good financial situation can affect people's life situation. However, the happiness of a nation can be measured with people's behavior. For example, polite treatment and out of rough treatments are the signs of a happy nation.
In addition, a better economy can make people happy lonely. But, recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2018 has shown that the significance of wealthy governments that use their money for cheap travels and fun entertainments can make happiest people in the world.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the advantages of economic effects on society, I profoundly believe that the benefits of national happiness far outweighed of financial situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 201.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56218905473 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05671091158 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646766169154 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2233906493 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355835476468 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150461840459 0.0925447433944 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100388127814 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1991102082 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100990228426 0.0609392437508 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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