Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, due to increasing competition employees may have to spend a lot of time in office working along-side team members. Some individuals believe that leisure hours should also be spent with colleagues while others opine that work life should not form a part of private life. In my opinion, I agree with the former view. This essay shall discuss both views with examples.
Firstly, many people believe that, enormous amount of their time and life is spent in office, which gives them less time for developing personal relationships, as a result, many close and dear relations are lost or forgotten. For instance, Hrithik Roshan, who is a renowned Bollywood actor, was much occupied with work so much that the family may have felt neglected, which resulted in a divorce. As a consequence, the actor had suffered from serious health concerns such as depression and anxiety. In short, individuals spending their free time with office friends may have serious repercussions on their family lives.
Secondly, in my opinion, I believe that free time should be also be spent with office staff, as this helps in creating strong bonds and work life in office may be much more fun and interesting. This is because, time is very valuable and people may respect one for investing their available time with them. For instance, if employees working on a same project meet up during weekends for movies or other interesting activities, this will strengthen their bond and help them understand each other. As a consequence, work related quarrels or other concerns may drastically reduce, improving efficiency and productivity. In other words, employees who spend their leisure time with each other may help in creating better understanding among each other.
In conclusion, many believe that work life and pirvate life should not be mixed as this can have serious implications on the personal front. However, in my opinion, I firmly believe that, employees who spend time with each other may help create better working environment for each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ailable time with them. For instance, if employees working on a same project meet...
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Suggestion:
...ter working environment for each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12835820896 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66681628748 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516417910448 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5745029752 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.533333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302135767346 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109130247682 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669541132702 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194168796636 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508027498773 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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