Some people believe it is imperative for individuals living in developed nations to reduce their energy consumption and lead a more sustainable lifestyle, given the evidence for global climate change. Others believe that such drastic lifestyle changes are unwarranted, based on the existing evidence for global climate change.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The statement contends that, It is very crucial for people to reduce their energy consumption of living style and monitor daily life style also author cites that, given evidence about global climate change is that, on based of, drastic life style change is unjustifiable means there is less possibility for change life style. because for human being global climate and matching with surrounding atmosphere is very useful, means harmony with global climate is necessary for people .
First,The agreement point is that, Every human plays major role for development of nation. that is people responsibility to manage their life-style and take care about surrounding environment, we know that Energy is major source for every devices of any technology, Energy always leads to different results means because of specific use of energy nation can developed its technology and manage more resources which is really required for people.
In addition of that, author claims that, energy consumption should require for better development of nation. because of energy consumption and individual can save their resources for long times, and for future those energy resources would be available for use.For example, When country's people manage electricity efficiently because of that, actually they help to nation for better energy(Electrical energy) management.like In Vietnam there is rule for every citizens is that for transportation they should use bicycle instead of vehicles, citizens manages their life style accordingly after that result of this ultimately fuel energy consumption got reduced. and they can provide that energy to projects which actually need more fuel energy than people transportation.
Secondly, the disagreement point is that, from evidence infers that ,drastic lifestyle changes are not really unwarranted, means after energy reduction we can say that, there is no more unbalanced environment and it is also mentioned that, there is possibility of that because of that no drastically change in life style in account of consideration of global climate change.
In conclusion, there is better way for make sustainable life-style for any developed nation by reduction of energy consumption and if basically would make impact on nation growth and if nation growth is possible after that, people life would be more reliable and sustainable as before but consideration of drastic change in climate there is not more advantage from energy consumption.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55291005291 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87129436907 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460317460317 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 23.0359550562 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.245415913 60.3974514979 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 233.222222222 118.986275619 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.0 23.4991977007 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 5.21951772744 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38490753293 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180989242007 0.0831039109588 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536303778612 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233539042041 0.150359130593 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455135462691 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 14.1392134831 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 48.8420337079 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 12.1743820225 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.8 12.1639044944 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 11.2143820225 168% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.