Some people believe that construction of new public buildings such as museums, town halls and sporting facilities is more important than renovation of the existing ones, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Planners of a city always want to improve their cities. Construct a new building and renovate the existing ones is the some ways for that improvement. But some people belive the construct a new building more important than the renovate and the other people belive the renovation is more important. In my opinion both are the important for a improve a city but two ways have some pluses and minuses.
On the one hand, construct a new place is give you a new style and shape of city sight but also the new construction is expensive and it wants too much reserves. If city palnners just use this method after few buildings thay have not reserve and money. For example if you build a sporting facility this is the good thing for people health and give them a new activity style but you construct a sporting facility for every neighborhood you spend too much money and you become more poor.
On the other hand, Renovate the old buildings cheaper than build new one but this way have some problems like there is nothing inovative and not give you a new sight. For example you renovate a historical house but you can not use this place for another work like sport or restaurant. But the old buildings has own remarkable style and some people love that pattern of architecture.
Finally, I think both ways improve the city with some sides also the both ways have negative parts. But my final opinion is new buildings gives you a some other perspective of seeing, new activities and new social environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68913857678 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47543727472 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464419475655 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.79482547 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316946566941 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137522174466 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944989158491 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220005622702 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619492650068 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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