Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
I think and believe that that men and woment areequally suited for task and one shouldnt be biased on the basis of their inherent physical differences. It would be judgemental prejudicial and discriminative to say that they are differently suited for many task. in this era where we live in freedom and equality we cant categorize the work for gender. everyone has choice of their intrest and task to perform.Though having some physical differences that women have sensitive and smaller body sizes in comparision to men but they can adopt equally in all kinds of works and field. let us take and instances of women joining british army, indian army and UN peace keeping armies they are given equal importance and equality. we can see women developing their career in wrestling sports adn many kinds of jobs like pilots and space scientists.
Experiments suggests that women have high pain taking capabilities and are able to bear the pain of giving birth and continuing the life on earth. They are highly concious of providing love and care as well as respectand education. It is highly seen that only women are hired for major works such as teachers doctors and nurses.They are believed to be the best drivers. However, many people may believe that women are only capable for household chores and caring, posing an example of saudi arabia where women are to be under the gurdainship of male member of family. that is conservative idea and thought and should be changed as saudi is trying to provide freedom for women by taking initiatives such as letting them to drive watch matches in the stadium. however people still adn orthodox and believing that women are not equal as male in their physical differences.
This is the era of 21st century where everyone believes in liberty and choices it is not wise to confront that men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many task. Rather they are independent and can adopt on the various suitation and can change their physical body and carry the task if they wish to taking an example of female wrestlers and sports women such as Serena Willams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many tasks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, well, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87158469945 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56506742677 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521857923497 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4284065931 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.357142857 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415165780445 0.243740707755 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148619144583 0.0831039109588 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132500964734 0.0758088955206 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312153481898 0.150359130593 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817055155102 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.