Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these two views and give your opinion
In the recent years, migration has become rather renowned due to an enormous amount of reasons which include skyroketing costs of living and raging wars in the motherlands. It has given rise to many multicultural nations. The first and foremost challenge faced by all immigrants alike is the culture shock, the sense of disorientation in the midst of a foreign land. While many make sound efforts to fit in and merge with the local culture, some try to prevail as minority communities by maintaining their cultural uniqueness and originality.
In my opinion, it is wise of the immigrants to blend in with the local culture at the start to build friendships and to avoid being ostracized and ridiculed from the society. Respecting the local cultural values, heritages and traditions could in turn earn a firm footing within a land predominated by the locals. On the other hand, it is equally important to stay close to the individual intrinsic traditions and aid in the flourishing of multicultural nations. Hence, the cultural identity of immigrants will remain solid while the nation could be enriched with a diversely skilled workforce to keep up with the increasing globalization.
Celebration of different cultural festivals could bring about an immense amount of joy to the people and it could also break the otherwise monotonous vibe of the nation. This practice would not only ensure the thriving of immigrant cultures but also, teach the fundamental importance of respecting different ethnicities, cultures etc.
In conclusion, it could be mentioned that the immigrants ought not try to adapt to the entirely alien local culture but, learn to live in coherence with it while holding one’s culture dear to them. This would give rise to a harmonious co-existence of multiple cultures within a nation that will indeed add value to its beauty.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15231788079 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94610447871 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.1636770098 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163468196688 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571747914734 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363546522872 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100560309792 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00695250059476 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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