The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to united nations statistic.
The tabular chart exhibits the information about the social and economical aspects of Canada, Japan, Peru and Zaire by United National report in 1994.
Overall, it is clearly seen from the chart that the developed countries had both economical and social living standard better as compared to under developing nations.
Primarily, it is vividly apparent that the Japan was highest in the annual income it was 15760 (US dollar) per person and the Canada was record at second highest it was 11100 (USA pound) per person. However, in consuming daily calories showed different trend the Canadian people consumed more calories is was 3326 where, Japanese people calories amount was 2846. The Peru and Zaire yearly earning by per person was 160 and 130 (US dollar) . The everyday calories consumption in Zaire was lowest about 200 per person than peru it noticed at 1927.
Furthermore, the life expectancy at birth was near by 80 in Canada and Japan and the adult literacy rate was same in both reasons it was 99% . In the rate of educated people was two more in Peru as compared to Zaire it showed at 34% . The life expectancy in Peru more than fifty but, in Zaire it was less than fifty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
... Canadian people consumed more calories is was 3326 where, Japanese people calorie...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'calories'' or 'calorie's', 'calory's'?
Suggestion: calories'; calorie's; calory's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74634146341 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35276004826 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531707317073 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3405258356 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.111111111 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0738154238791 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407950346025 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652062558057 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820462446961 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781543970111 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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