Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, technology took a dominance part in our life. it changes many ways in human lives and now engaging to houshold activities, leisure time of offsprings and adults and then work activities. As such there both merits and demerits of this apprehension, Although I am in my opinion that, former outdo the former. there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most prominent factor is that, as it is claimed use of automation for day to day work make them very easy, punctual and accurate. As an example when we use a computer programme to manage inventory make employment life easier and hassle free.
Moreover, factual evidence of enhancement of stress free, clean and safe environment could be witnessed with the approach of technology. it also tend to escalate communication with our loved ones and accelerate social relationships stronger than before. For example we can call to long distance friends and see face to face using Information technology software applications like Skype and viber. children can play games online by selecting what ever they want with the evolution of the computers. The most conspesues trend of today's advertising field is using social media which is also dominate work activities by it.Even in the house hold activities are also automated using machines like for cleaning, polishing and even for cooking.
Furthermore, most of us have sense that the use of technology in every nook and corner will negatively could be so destructive which limits and tears down healthy and day-to-day exercise activities from human life and tend to escalate abnormal condition in life. this apprehension also could be a prominent factor for replacing human jobs by machines.
To sum up, according to the arguments outlined above, I can conclude that use of technology for humans life is a good approach but as humans, we should be responsible and careful when machinery replacing human activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1167192429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84567766273 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602523659306 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8236410134 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.857142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13665088989 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504967790943 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689084868862 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750119335495 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064818304544 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.