Some people believe that technology has led to many positive developments in their lives, while others think technology is gradually taking over control of the way people live.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
In today-technology dominated world, some people believe that technology has led to many developments in their lives while some people argue that technology is taking over control of the way people live. I think that benefits from technology outweigh these issues.
Believe it or not, it is an undeniable fact that technology brings about many advantages to people in terms of medical services. With today’s technology, doctors can diagnose many illnesses faster. For example, X-ray machines can find out the problems of diseases in human bones. Without x-ray machines, it would take doctors a much time to diagnose diseases and therefore patients’ life can be at risk. Because of these positive upsides, many countries are improving technology in medical fields.
Despite these above benefits, technology is not without its concern in people communication. The best example for this is smartphones, the most popular device in people’s lives. Using mobile phones too often means people will have a limited amount of time for communication with others around them. The direct results of this are time wastage and possibility of being stressed. This not only propels people to ineffective working but also poor health quality. Therefore, it is apparent that smartphones, one of the greatest communicative inventions of human can act as un obstacle for many people to be the master of their own life.
In conclusion, although people’s lives can sometimes be sabotaged by technology but these techniques also can boost human life up. People should not too depend on technique and find out the way to balance their benefits and their drawbacks.
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- Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37786259542 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94959155157 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8521098781 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400294557248 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124682953312 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135173350568 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271964100359 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179623785831 0.056905535591 316% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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