some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product or service. Do you agree or disagree?
In this materialistic world price is most important in our glurreas life. price show product quality. there are many sectors in rate is most important like education, medical, smart product and so on.
First and foremost it is irrefutable that there are number of points among them the main point is in this morden era most of people used expensive product like smart phone, smart tv and so on. because thay can easily our work and they are very safe. For example I phone x it's phone very safely and secure and they can provide good security. On the other side some cheaper products can not provid good facility like old tv. they can not display good graficas and some smart facility.
Secondly , there are many five star hotel provide brand-new food and deliver expensive facility on the flip side there are number of three star hotel supply some two-penny product and give some second quality food and in this product price is most important in this morden world people have to Beg good quality. For example there are many good hospitals available in the world. Such as kd hospital has been given adequate healthcare facilities like good doctors teem, expensive medicine and fascinating room are provide on the other side some cheaper hospital provide bad facilities and doctors terms.
In my point of view all the product should not very expensive and depend on product. Some cheaper products can be good among them expensive products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Price
...is most important in our glurreas life. price show product quality. there are many se...
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Suggestion: There
...rreas life. price show product quality. there are many sectors in rate is most import...
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Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion, medical, smart product and so on. First and foremost it is irrefutable tha...
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Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...em the main point is in this morden era most of people used expensive product like smart phone...
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Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ely and secure and they can provide good security. On the other side some cheape...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ood graficas and some smart facility. Secondly , there are many five star hote...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and some smart facility. Secondly , there are many five star hotel provide ...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hotels'?
Suggestion: hotels
... Secondly , there are many five star hotel provide brand-new food and deliver expe...
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Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...nsive medicine and fascinating room are provide on the other side some cheaper hospital...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86585365854 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28126784692 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508130081301 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.3626828227 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0769230769 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166958006781 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723343571602 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541899847131 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124820359268 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504364442184 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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