The graphs below provide information about the sales in England of three different kinds of music. The graphs together cover five decades and the sales are measured in pounds sterling.
The bar graph represents the comparison of distinct types of music that was purchased in britain while, line graph reveals the sales of PoP, classical and Rock music in billion pounds over the time period of 40 years.
It is apperant from former illustration that the sales of pop music in first two years remained higher by earning 5 billion pounds which alarmingly delined in remaining tow decades and went under 4 billion pounds. Nextly, sales of Rock music remained under 4 billion pounds throught the time period of 4 years. Finally, classical music's sales also followed the same trend as Pop music but ever went higher than 4 billions.
It further clear from latter illustration that in the begining of 1970's Pop and Rock started sailing aproximately from 3 billion that gradually incline throughout the begining of 1980. While, pop music sales kept on surging and Rock music sales fell down in last decade. On the other hand, Classical music's sale was 4 billion in 1960's which reaced below 2 billion pounds by 1990.
Overall, Pop music was the most popular music in britain which kept on increasing for sailing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...les of PoP, classical and Rock music in billion pounds over the time period of 40 years...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'clears'?
Suggestion: clears
...t higher than 4 billions. It further clear from latter illustration that in the be...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'musics'' or 'music's'?
Suggestion: musics'; music's
...st decade. On the other hand, Classical musics sale was 4 billion in 1960s which reace...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1960s'.
Suggestion: in the 1960s
...nd, Classical musics sale was 4 billion in 1960s which reaced below 2 billion pounds by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9057591623 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39467992168 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528795811518 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5808900647 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.125 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22463887805 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119334259815 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623733821778 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146864785202 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550766220227 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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