Study needs time, peace and comfort, whereas employment needs the same thing. Someone says it is impossible to combine those two because one distracts one another. Do you think this is realistic in our life today? To what extent do you agree with it? Support your opinion with example.
These day's, multitude of critical issue are begin debated all over the globe and massive upsurge in the manage time pace and comfort in study and employment is most controversial one. I will explain my point of view stance with the help of supporting argument and instance.
To begin with, i can offer a variety of argument to support my point of view. Foremost among these, study and employment both are very important aspect of our life we need both but some time some people get difficulties to continue any one among them. They have no any choice to continue any one so they carry both and balance them equally.
Another pivotal aspect of my point of view are most of personal are like to be independent they self dependent earn them self and help their family financially also. This happen in poor family because their family have no money to give education for their children.
Finally, after taking aforemetion point of view from personal perspective i am inclined to believed that both education and employment are able to support but we have to struggle more in our life has become one most discuss topic these day's.
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- How widely of you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? what problem will it cause? 72
- Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples. 72
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: BEING_BEGIN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'being'?
Suggestion: being
...e days, multitude of critical issue are begin debated all over the globe and massive ...
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Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
...e days, multitude of critical issue are begin debated all over the globe and massive ...
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Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...l over the globe and massive upsurge in the manage time pace and comfort in study and empl...
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Line 2, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... argument and instance. To begin with, i can offer a variety of argument to supp...
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Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...ome people get difficulties to continue any one among them. They have no any choice to ...
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Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... continue any one among them. They have no any choice to continue any one so they ...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of personal are like to be independent they self dependent earn them self and h...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... self and help their family financially also. This happen in poor family because the...
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Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...point of view from personal perspective i am inclined to believed that both educa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 1207.87684729 77% => OK
No of words: 197.0 242.827586207 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73096446701 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43840876511 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 139.433497537 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58883248731 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.641710973 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133063103538 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561818797075 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456824041942 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804874492018 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375754381231 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 55.0591133005 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.