Should people get a job right after school or should they attend university. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Majority of students after completion of their schooling would be in conundrum state whether to opt for a job or a university education. This essay will discuss both ideas and put forward my opinion.
Firstly, most of the students choose to secure a job immediately after ending up their studies in the schools because they may not be strong enough financially to pursue the university education. For example, some parents, who are poor to pay fees for their offspring university education, think that they can start earning money if they join a job, even if it is low paid, which would be helpful for running a family. On counterpart if a child starts to do a job at a very young age, there will be very fewer job opportunities to settle in their career, moreover, they will lose lots of joy and knowledge for a university like fests, Industrial tours, etc.
However, by preferring university education, one may have many advantages like better career opportunities and a chance of learning new skills. Firstly, by attending university education, a person can have more job opportunities compared to the people already doing a job immediately after their schooling. For instance, the eligibility criteria of any job in the Multi-National Companies are minimum graduation. Secondly, they would have a wide chance to engage with new people and also able to adopt new skills.
To conclude, I strongly advocate that joining university is much beneficial than choosing a job path immediately after school, because of benefits such as better job opportunities and scope of learning new things
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05703422053 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93970698225 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5810219409 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173796987171 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788207204735 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416558712579 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118536085073 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229804338882 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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