Many people believe that the next world war will happen as a result of conflicts over water. Is this fear justified? Give reasons for your answer.
Undeniably it is true that there is water scarcity pervades all around the world. Large number of people are agreeing to this that next world war can broke as a consequence of conflicts over water.
To begin with, water is crucial element of our life. Water is used in all our activities from drinking to bathing. As water is scarce resource, there are many conflicts of disagreements of usage of water. For instance, according to a survey, it was found that the amount of rainfall of last year was so low that people were forced to rely on single source of water. Likewise, farmers were also forced to use the ground water on a high level resulting in depletion of ground water level. Moreover, 97.3% of water is either sal water or polluted water. Water pollution is another reason behind water conflicts. Many big companies removes their water wastes by channelising them into water bodies which pollutes them.
In addition to this, water conflicts are more likely to be happened upon usage. The population has been grown to a large number in the last 50 years. As a result, there is shortage of water. Moreover, the other cause that can give to the water conflicts is possession of water for own benefit. For example, a research conducted by a Scottish researcher found that, in the past people were taking forceful possession of water bodies to gain advantage of it.
In a nutshell, it can be said that there are many scientists, researchers and archeologists who believe that water conflicts will be the main cause of next world war.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...round the world. Large number of people are agreeing to this that next world war can broke a...
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Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'remove'.
Suggestion: remove
...ind water conflicts. Many big companies removes their water wastes by channelising them...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77985074627 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56569671265 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2037446394 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0625 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351685153105 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125194200499 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790203873576 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237093822276 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363514677873 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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